Copyright 2000 Carol
Most educational and reference publishers
spend between 8-12% of their marketing budget on space advertising.
With the advent of all the new dot coms entering the markets,
the noise is getting louder and teachers and librarians are being
bombarded with more and more advertising messages. So, how do
you ensure that your message is being heard above the din? The
key is developing a compelling headline.
Advertising headlines are the single most important element in
your ad. If it doesn't grab the readers attention, they won't
read the rest of the copy, won't know what you are trying to say,
and most importantly, won't respond to your offer. Research tells
us that less than 1 of 5 readers read on from the headline. This
translates into a whopping 80% of readers who are unaffected by
your advertising message. Improving your headline can mean the
difference between an ad that pulls and one that is simply a waste
The first thing you have to do to write a compelling headline
is to put yourself in the shoes of the reader. Who are you trying
to reach? A teacher? A librarian? A curriculum coordinator? principal?
Clearly defining your target audience is an essential first step
because if you don't know who you are talking to, you can't figure
out what to say that would "hit their hot button" and
make them stop, read on, and respond.
A compelling headline MUST appeal to an immediate need. The immediate
need of an elementary school teacher is not the same as the immediate
need of a high school librarian. Your headline must also distinguish
between "hot prospects" and "warm prospects".
Many will see your words but only a few are truly "hot".
And fewer yet are ready to take immediate action.
The five classic approaches to creating a compelling headline
Highlight the key
benefit of your product or service.
Make a promise
Ask a question
Pose a challenge
Use a testimonial
In one of the best books on advertising, "How to Make Your
Advertising Make Money," John Caples documents research uncovered
that the ten most frequently-used words in Vic Schwab's "100
Good Headlines and Why They Were So Profitable." Here is
a list of the 4 most frequently used words in those headlines:
Just for fun, here is a list of headlines
that appeared in the October issue of Curriculum Administrator.
See if you can identify the headline with the company who placed
the ad. Ask yourself these questions: Who is the headline speaking
to? What need is being met? What approach are they using? Does
the headline contain the important words listed above? Spending
time reviewing your competitor's approaches can be a valuable
learning experience when it comes to planning your own campaigns!
How, indeed, can you stand out from all these
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ABOUT THE AUTHOR
This article was written by Carol Ann Waugh, President of Xcellent
Marketing, a marketing and new business development firm specializing
in the educational and library market. Xcellent Marketing offers
a variety of marketing services to help publishers increase their
revenues and profits from identifying new markets, providing critiques
of web sites and marketing communications such as direct mail, catalogs,
advertisements, etc. as well as developing effective traditional
as well as Internet-based marketing plans. Carol can be reached
at (303) 388-5215 or at email@example.com